In holiday, I was read " if give me 3 days light " whole book. The vivid language in the book and commendable spirit moved deeply I.
假期中，我读到了《假如给我三天光明》整本书。书中生动的语言和可贵的精神深深地打动了我。
Especially the other area in hill of this paragraph of “ is lush and green thick woods, here has giant oak and beautiful evergreen tree, their truncal resembling is overgrow green mossiness, the sort of mood that if the dream is like the scene of unreal,lets a person also follows joyance rise. ” was used one paragraph this respectively after be being generalized first specific, was to write lush and green woods above all, wrote again later have what tree, compare these trees what to resemble. The mood that says aroma can let a person finally becomes better, such writing gimmick can be used in the writing of the scene, foil with the scenery good humor, this kind writes a law to let a composition I understand the scene blends at a draught how should write, let me feel writing becomes relaxed.
特别是这一段“山里的其它地区是郁郁葱葱的茂密森林，这里有巨大的橡树和漂亮的常青树，它们的树干像是长满了青苔似的，那种如梦如幻的情景让人的心情也跟着喜悦了起来。”这一段分别用了先概括后具体，首先是写了郁郁葱葱的树林，后来又写了有什么树，比喻这些树像什么。最后说香气可以让人的心情变得更好，这样的写作手法可以用在情景的写作中，用景色衬托美好的心情，这种写法让作文我一下子明白情景交融应该怎么写，让我觉得写作变得轻松。
In the meantime, I experienced Helen adamant, the drive that never abandons, read all effort before the university on Helen when me when, my orbit is wet, I was touched, we know Helen is blindness deaf-mute person, we are different, but she does the thing with us, more outstanding than us, this is how old difficulty to her. Becoming her to encounter is not braille book when, she did not abandon, create a condition however, more learn hard, think oneself are a normal person, encounter little difficulty to shrink back, I am sorry more oneself ah! I think: Evermore, I also should be accomplished adamant.
同时，我感受到了海伦坚强不屈，永不放弃的精神，当我读到海伦上大学以前的所有努力时，我的眼眶湿润了，我感动了，我们都知道海伦是个又失明又聋哑的人，我们不同，可她却要做和我们一样的事，还比我们更优秀，这对她来说是多大的困难。当她遇到不是盲文书的时候，她并没有放弃，而是创造条件，更努力地学习，想想自己是一个正常的人，遇到一点点困难就退缩，多对不起自己啊！我想：从此以后，我也要做到坚强不屈。(文/任沛涵)