On the weekend, I cherish excited mood to followed mom to come south lake revolution memorial hall. When reaching destination, see new house stands tall and upright before us only, grandiose and grand. I am fierce look up, 7 Yi Yi gives birth to ” of memorial hall of revolution of the lake austral “ brightness aureate big character makes me be filled with deep esteem.
周末，我怀着激动的心情跟着妈妈来到了南湖革命纪念馆。到达目的地时，只见新馆矗立在我们面前，宏伟壮观。我猛一抬头，“南湖革命纪念馆”七个熠熠生辉的金色大字令我肃然起敬。
Cent of altogether of whole memorial hall is three-layer. Just stepped into a gate, a red boat greeted my eye immediately. Mom tells me to say: “ this is the place that congress of Chinese Communist first time holds. I listened to ” to feel very shock, why the conference is not hold in the assembly room of high buildings and large mansions, be held on a boat however? For accept as a souvenir, I was patted in front of red boat according to.
整个纪念馆一共分为三层。刚踏进大门，一艘红船立刻映入了我的眼帘。妈妈告诉我说：“这是中国共产党第一次代表大会召开的地方。”我听了觉得很震撼，为什么会议不是在高楼大厦的会议室举行，而是在一艘小船上召开呢？为了留念，我在红船前面拍了照。
Saw red boat, ground of my be reluctant to part left. Toward in go, a pair of lifelike drawing attracted my eyeball. Mom tells me: This astonishs “ namely the tiger door smoke of gunpowder of China and foreign countries. ” sees only forest criterion Xu stands on stage of smoke of gunpowder, directing laborers smoke of gunpowder. They have a composition taking big basket, going to opium of the dump in pool of smoke of gunpowder; Some holds bar of smoke of gunpowder, beating opium; Return some to raise baton of smoke of gunpowder high, as if saying: “ Chinese is not OK by bully disgrace! ” .
看完了红船，我依依不舍地离开了。往里走，一副栩栩如生的图画吸引了我的眼球。妈妈告诉我：“这就是震惊中外的虎门硝烟。”只见林则徐站在硝烟台上，指挥着民工们硝烟。他们有作文的拿着大篓子，正在往硝烟池里倾倒鸦片；有的手持硝烟棒，正在敲打鸦片；还有的把硝烟棒高高举起，仿佛在说：“中国人是不可以被欺辱的！”。
Come to 2 buildings, look! There is the model of Jia Xinghuo station 1921 there, see trainset pulls loud whistle only, give out “ toot …… . The noise of toot ……” , blast blast smother flocks from vent-pipe and go out. If you are staring at it for long to look, meeting feeling trainset is in flying travel.
来到二楼，瞧！那儿陈列着1921年的嘉兴火车站模型，只见小火车拉响汽笛，发出“呜……。嘟……”的响声，阵阵浓烟从排气管里蜂拥而出。若你长时间盯着它看，会感觉小火车正在飞速行驶呢。
Imperceptible in, we visited the exhibition hall of 3 buildings again, a precious photograph, a historical data of a full and accurate, a hangover of a martyr, let me feel without exception myriad.
不知不觉中，我们又参观了三楼的展厅，一幅幅珍贵的照片，一篇篇翔实的史料，一件件先烈的遗物，都让我感概万千。
Travel this, make me very unforgettable, because it let me know person of a lot of heroes, learned their precious character. In the study henceforth and life, I must work energetically study, become an eligible small citizen.
这次旅行，让我很难忘，因为它让我认识了很多英雄人物，并学习到了他们宝贵的品质。在今后的学习和生活中，我一定要发奋学习，做一位合格的小公民。(文/黄佳周)