Actually, there are a lot of dear ones in our reality life, need you to discover, go observing. The family member that I say is more than it is the person that is familiar with very much with us, still have the stranger beside us. Though they are not the family members that are familiar with very much with us, but the thing that they do, let us feel family member of be better than however.
其实，在我们现实生活中有很多亲人，需要你去发现，去观察。我所说的亲人不止是与我们非常熟悉的人，还有我们身边的陌生人。他们虽说不是与我们非常熟悉的亲人，但他们做的事，却让我们感觉胜似亲人。
That day, the ding that classes are over rang, weather also follows cloudy come down. A little while, light rain had below, back-to-back, issued heavy rain again.
那一天，放学的钟声响了，天气也跟着阴沉了下来。一会儿，下起了小雨，紧接着，又下起了大雨。
Classmates walk out of a classroom immediately, hitting an umbrella to come home together with mom. I stand before classroom door, looking at far, awaiting mom to receive me. Waited a little while, not when. I just remember mom wants to work overtime, she says to let myself come home, need not wait for her. My a moment ago expectation the mood also becomes grave as this cloudy weather. Time one second ground went, I cherished complex mood to stand 15 minutes. I think: Cannot wait again, anyway my home is not far also from the school, ran a little while to arrive. Then, I ran into rain in. Run to school doorway merely, I by wringing. Do not have method, I continue to run forth, run after composition school, I take shelter from rain with respect to the buffet around the school.
同学们立刻走出教室，和妈妈一起打着伞回家了。我站在教室门前，望着远处，等待着妈妈来接我。等了一会儿，没等到。我才想起妈妈要加班，她说让我自己回家，不用等她。我刚才的期待心情随着这阴沉的天气也变得低沉了。时间一分一秒地过去了，我怀着复杂的心情站了十五分钟。我就想：不能再等了，反正我的家离学校也不远，跑一会儿就到了。于是，我就跑进了雨里。仅仅跑到学校门口，我就被淋湿了。没办法，我继续往前跑，跑出作文学校后，我就在学校附近的小卖部避雨。
At this moment, I see elder sister of an eldest sister is hitting an umbrella to go to me, affectionately says to me: “ and I open an umbrella together come home! I look at ” elder sister of this eldest sister is very familiar, thought carefully, the big elder sister that just remembers this lives next door my home namely, it is my neighbour. Then, I am hitting an umbrella to come home together with elder sister of this eldest sister. On the road, eldest sister elder sister goes to the umbrella all the time I here move, oneself obscured only half, body of other in part still is being worn by drench.
这时，我看到一位大姐姐打着伞向我走来，亲切地对我说：“和我一起打伞回家吧！”我看着这位大姐姐好熟悉，仔细想了一下，才想起这就是住在我家隔壁的大姐姐，是我的邻居。于是，我就和这位大姐姐一起打着伞回家了。在路上，大姐姐一直把伞往我这边移，自己只遮住了一半，另一半身子还在被雨淋着。
Arrived home, I knock, in the home still nobody. Eldest sister elder sister sees this kind of case, let me be waited for a little while in her home, wait for my mom to come back. Reached home of eldest sister sister, eldest sister elder sister takes dry towel to let me wipe immediately by the hair with wet drench. Then, elder sister of this eldest sister teachs me writing line of business again, coach for me homework. Later, mom came back, receive me returned the home. Before I come home, elder sister of that eldest sister places a hand to me, I also laugh to elder sister of that eldest sister.
到家了，我敲了敲门，家里仍然没人。大姐姐看到这种情况，就让我在她家待一会儿，等我妈妈回来。到了大姐姐家，大姐姐立刻拿来干的毛巾让我擦干被雨淋湿的头发。接着，这位大姐姐又教我写作业，为我辅导功课。后来，妈妈回来了，就把我接回了家。在我回家之前，那位大姐姐给我摆了摆手，我也对那位大姐姐笑了笑。
Though elder sister of this eldest sister is not my right dear one, but she lets me feel be better than my family member.
这位大姐姐虽说不是我真正的亲人，但她让我感觉胜似我的亲人。(文/王博琪)